Kaela's+persuasive+copy

Dec.7, 2009

Dear Mom and Dad, We should have the guest room redecorated into a television room for me. I think we should get it done because in 2 years, I'll be the only kid at home. I will have more time to have sleepovers and Michael won't be in the way. I need a place to have a sleepover and since you guys wake up early, then you guys can have breakfast without worrying about waking us up in the family room.

I understand you are concerned about when my brothers, Paul and Dan, come home during Christmas time, but the couch in the room could be a pullout couch. It would be perfect.They could have a comfy bed and a television. I also realize that you are confused on why I need another room. I would like another room because on all of the other t.vs, there is always football playing. I don't want to watch t.v in my room because there is clothes everywhere and junk. It is also quicker to go across the room instead of walk downstairs. Lastly, I'm aware of you worrying about messing up the room. However, I know I won't mess it up because there isn't any clothes in that room and I won't bring anything in that room. I am well aware of your concerns, but I can insure you that I will do everything in my power to keep the room tidy and useful.

Thank you for your generous time and I hope you will consider my request. Mom, you guys have been the best parents ever. Thank you for all that you do for me. Thanks so much.

Love, Kaela