persuasive+essay

Dear Mom and Dad, December 7,2009

I would like to be able to go to my favorite amusment park, Elich Gardens, by my self with a friend. I would Go with Nick Marchese. The reason why is that ally went with a friend by her self and was fine. I think that it would be fun because Nick and I could go on every ride and not have to wait for anyone. Nick also has a phone so i could call you guys at any time. I would have so much fun and you wouldn't have to worry about me. There is a low chance of me getting taking away. Next can have you drive us to the entrench and be back at the entrance at any time. We would only stay on the dry rides and have money to spend on only food and nothing else. Finially I really want this because i could get a season pass and go any time i wanted to. Also if you wanted to know where I was then you could just call nick on his cell phone. Sincerely, Jake