Kyle's+persuasive+paragraph

===I understand that the equipment and items are expensive,however, I would do chores until I could pay you back. Also, I would look for items that are on sale. I know that it may be dangerous however, I would always wear all the gear, and be as careful as possible. I also understand that the time commitment is a problem too, but I would get my homework done, and the chores ( to pay back my Dad), before I go to practice. Also, wouldn't you like to see me race across the finish line with a blue ribbon hanging around my neck? Lastly, I would practice everyday to get better and and see my improvement throughout my success.===