Mercedes+Persuasive+letter

12/7/09 Dear,Dad

I think I should get a I pod beacuse I will not spend so much on my DS or my PSP And I can clean when I am liseng to my I pod and I will spand more time out side when You are at work. And I under stand that they are expensive and we mite not be able to aforde them but I really want one I know I had a mp3 player but when we moved I think I lost it and the cords. So I relly want one and even if I get a nother Mp3 player or maby CDs fore my rado I do not care I just need my musice and If I do not get one I will under stand Thank you fore under standing and if you get me one thank you very much.