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Dear Mom, I want a ipod because it has many uses like a calculator and music. well i do my homework. And Internet and i can look up math games and i know that you think it is to expensive. but you can get one from the pawn shop and get it for under 100 dollars. I would not loose it i would keep it with you all the time.

and i know that you said that it would get scratched and there is things that make it not get scratched and it still will work. will you pleas get me a i pod. Mom i also know that you think that it will get scratched and there is a screen protector and a case that i can put it in so it wont get scratched